Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Journal 4

Journal Assignment #4

Descriptive Writing Assignment

Using Ann Hodgman’s essay as a model, write a detailed description of a recent meal that you ate.  Your focus should be on describing as many aspects of your food as you can.  

Important Elements:                      Concrete/Abstract Images
                                                            Multi-Sensory Images                                                                                                       Simile, Metaphor, Analogy
Dominant Impression
                                                           
 
            The flavorful and creamy taste of cookie dough ice cream is like no other. With each bite comes the taste of sweet cookie dough mixed with the soothing coldness of the ice cream. Ice cream on a hot day is as refreshing as jumping into the pool after being in the sun for hours. The taste is comforting and can be savored and enjoyed for as long as you make it last. The cookie dough in the ice cream brings back memories from childhood in the kitchen eating the cookie dough out of the bowl that mom is cooking in. Being able to have that cookie was the best part of the day as a kid. The ice cream melts in your mouth and reveals the hidden chunks of sugar filled cookie dough. The cookie dough and ice cream complement each other perfectly like salt and pepper or peanut butter and jelly. 

Journal 3

Journal Assignment #3

“No Wonder They Call Me a Bitch” – Ann Hodgman
(The Norton Sampler p.77)

Read the selection and write a one paragraph response to the following questions.

1.  Cite three specific examples of Hodgman’s descriptive imagery that you find to be particularly effective. 


“When I pulled open the container, juice spurted all over my hand, and the first chunk I speared was trailing a long gray vein.”

“I gagged my way through can after can of stinky, white-flecked mush and bag after bag of stinky, fat-drenched nuggets.”

“It wasn’t bad except for its texture- like meat loaf with ground-up chicken bones.”

2.  What do you think Hodgman’s purpose was in writing this essay?  What overall message/meaning do you take from the essay?  


I think that her purpose was to find out for herself if our food is like dog food. When we see the advertising it looks like it would be connected with human food. The advertising can be deceitful and deceptive. She was being satirical and humorous that she uses to send the message that she is not fully being literal. She is making fun of food magazines and things like that because she was a former food critic. 

Journal 2

Journal 2 - Annie Dillard – “The Death of a Moth,” from Holy the
Firm

1. How are the moths in the essay’s opening different from the moth at the campsite?  What do the different moths represent? 


The moths in the beginning are grey and dusty lying on the floor. They are just body parts laying there that cannot be identified. The one at the campsite is very descriptive. The dead dusty moths are not very inspiring, but the moth in the flame lights up and gave light and inspiration.




2. What lesson does the moth provide that Dillard takes back to her students? 


It shows her that you should not just sit back and not try your hardest. The moths in the bathroom are read and not even recognizable because they just died in a boring house and place. They are unrecognizable as for the people who do not try to do big things are not remember. The moth caught in fire lights up and provides inspiration. The moth in the flame symbolizes people that go for the gold and try their best in everything.



3.  How many references are there to fire in the essay?  What’s the larger significance of fire in the essay? 


The title of the book that she is reading has the word “fire” in the title. This is the book that made her want to be a writer. While she is reading, the moth flies into the fire and burns like a wick glowing gold. She leaves on candles when she goes to sleep instead of putting them right out. Her cat’s tail gets burned by the candle when it accidently got its tail caught in the flame. The fire is inspiration to show passion and emotion, it is a spark.


4. Address how each of the following quotes connect to Dillard’s overall point.  

a.      “I would rather be ashes than dust!
          I would rather that my spark should burn out in a brilliant blaze than it should be stifled by dry-rot.
          I would rather be a superb meteor, every atom of me in        magnificent glow, than a sleepy and permanent planet.
          The function of man is to live, not to exist.
          I shall not waste my days trying to prolong them.
          I shall use my time.”
                    -Jack London

This is a philosophy on how she wants her students to live their lives and how it should be done. It is better to go all out in your live and never me content with mediocrity. You do not want to be the one that just falls off and did not live for anything. You want to be the moth that burned when it died because it died for something. Dillard calls the moth a martyr for chasing after what it wanted even though it died.

b. “Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire.”
          -William Butler Yeats

This is about education. She is educating her students and the reader by using the image of fire and all of its meanings. Something has to come from within you to push you to be the best. She tries to educate her students with what she learned from the burning moth hoping to inspire them because it inspired her. When you light a fire there is a spark and she is using education to spark an interest not just fill their brains with information.

c. “A book should serve as the ax for the frozen sea within us.”  
          -Franz Kafka

This goes back to when she talked about using an ax. The ax is being used in literature metaphorically to show how to go at life. Attack the day and push hard to get excited about life. The book she read and the one she wrote both serve as inspiration to her and the reader as an ax breaking up the laziness within us and sparking our minds. 

Journal 1

No Budging
             Joe Smith has loved the environment his entire twenty-two years on the Earth. His favorite part of it is the park he went to when he was younger. That very park was being torn down to build a new mall. There was no way in the world that Joe was going to let his entire park be destroyed. When he caught word that the park was being destroyed, he formulated a plan of what he needed to do. He set out for the park, deciding he must be the one to stop it from totally being destroyed. When Joe reached the park, his heart dropped. All was gone except one final tree in the middle of the park. The wrecking crew was on break so it gave him time to start his plan. Joe laid out his beach towel that he had been carrying, along with a pillow he brought from his couch. Joe laid down on the towel and laid his head on the pillow, which rested right in front of the last tree. When the wrecking crew returned, they saw him lying their and were moved by his love for the park. They knew that they could not finish destroying the park, even if it was their job. They had not known that this park was so important to someone who lived so close to it. They realized that the money to destroy it was not worth destroying a memory of someone’s childhood. Joe knew he had accomplished his goal. He closed his eyes and fell asleep in his favorite park next to his favorite tree.